| Change log entry 64763 | |
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| Processed by: | richwarm (2017-12-01 11:10:02 UTC) |
| Comment: |
<< review queue entry 61346 - submitted by 'ycandau' >> trying to make this (marginally) better 1. back in the days, Rich didn't like "moderate". It doesn't seem to add much. 2. "dwindle"--I'd like to have a gloss to mirror the idea of "contract, grow smaller" that is in 收斂. or "to fade"? 因局斗的關係笑容收斂許多 (his smile didn't vanish but diminished several degrees) 3. /to vanish/to make vanish/--transitive use leads to /to curb/ 4. for your consideration: 上了國中後他確實收斂許多 he has settled down, he has learned to control himself-- does this need a gloss? -------------------- Editor: I left a comment. |
| Diff: |
- 收斂 收敛 [shou1 lian3] /to vanish/to moderate/to exercise restraint/to curb (one's mirth, arrogance etc)/to astringe/(math.) to converge/ + 收斂 收敛 [shou1 lian3] /to dwindle/to vanish/to make vanish/to exercise restraint/to curb (one's mirth, arrogance etc)/to astringe/(math.) to converge/ |